http://ewinfic.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ewinfic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] the_deep_magic 2009-10-31 01:44 am (UTC)

I knew Zach was going to bottom for him. I just KNEW it. *dies of squee* Or at least I hoped it, after penetration was Chapter 4. I was also anticipating L-bombs, and just, yay. YAY!

I love this fic. This fic makes my eyes go all starry, my facy go all smiley, my legs go all wobbly. This fic is like a birthday treat covered in gooey icing. This fic is like the first morning of summer vacation. This fic is SO BUNK.

The fact that Zach signed the note... the way Chris describes him at the party and later on the next morning... the ruined pants... the socks at the end... the grammar... the fucking wonderful dirty talk... and this:

Chris carefully positioned himself and began easing his way into Zach, catching the older man’s soft gasps with his own lips.

*melts*

“C’mon,” Zach whispered. “I’ve got you. Let go.”

*wibble*

The ending was perfect. This fic has made me deliriously happy. And now...

... bunk. Srsly. Holy god DAMN.

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