The Deep Magic ([identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] the_deep_magic 2009-11-02 04:01 am (UTC)

Not what I was expecting, I had absolutely no idea how you could make a chapter from something that felt almost complete already but you did. The format feels different; this is like a culmination of everything that's happened and #5 is the wrapping on the package.

I'm glad you liked it! I usually get nervous writing endings, and it's good to hear that I was able to wrap it up well.

As for the title, I was going for the idea of yellow light = slow down. I actually had it as a working title for one of my previous fics (the one I ended up calling Bite Your Tongue), but I thought it worked better for this one.

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