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the_deep_magic ([personal profile] the_deep_magic) wrote2009-08-19 03:32 pm
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FIC: Star Trek RPS -- Cocksucker


Title: Cocksucker

Author:[info]the_deep_magic

Pairing: Pinto (with Chris/OMCs + surprise guest star!)

Rating: hard R

Word Count: 1,150

Disclaimer: I don’t know them and this probably did not happen. Probably.

Summary: For this prompt at the kink meme – Chris Pine's cocksucker lips attract a lot of attention. They always have. That's always what men what from him, his blue eyes staring up at them while he works his mouth over their dicks, and when he's done he gets a handjob or a raging set of blue balls and he's sent on his way. It's miserable and it makes him feel cheap, worthless, angsty as all fuck. I need: 5 guys who had Chris suck their dicks, and 1 guy who made love to him.

A/N: [Aragorn] A day may come when I write a fic that does not end in marshmallows and wildflowers and rainbow-farting unicorns. BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAY! [/Aragorn]  Originally posted at the kink meme, cleaned up and reposted here.

 

One

The first time, he’s just curious. Because, really, what is college for, and this is Berkeley, right? So when a guy at a theater party leans into his space and whispers, “Fuck, those lips were made for sucking cock,” he decides to give it a go. How bad can it be?

 

He fucking hates it.

 

The guy – Taylor? Tyler? Chris forgets pretty soon after – is gorgeous to look at, but he turns into an ear-grabbing, wild-thrusting, filth-talking asshole the second Chris gets his lips around the guy’s dick.  He seems to completely disregard Chris’ inconvenient need for oxygen and gives no warning at all when he comes, and just laughs when Chris gags and spits violently into the hem of his own shirt.

 

“I knew it,” Taylor/Tyler says as he tucks himself back into his pants.

 

Two
The second time, he’s asked around enough to know that his first time was a disaster, so he resolves to give it another chance. He picks the guy this time, a stereotypical frat boy business major with a trust fund and an ego to rival Chris’ own.

 

This time, Chris shoves Brad onto the bed and yanks his designer slacks down before the guy can even ask for it. Chris is on him in a second, pinning his hips down with bruising hands before dragging his tongue up the vein on the underside of his cock, teasing the slit, sucking hard and fast and angry.

 

It’s not great. The guy wears too much cologne and whines when he comes and it tastes fucking disgusting. The handjob Chris gets afterward is perfunctory and almost not worth it.

 

But the thrill Chris gets from the act has little to do with pleasure. When he’s got Trust Fund Brad held down on the bed, writhing and whining and begging for his mouth, it doesn’t matter that he’s some flaky-ass English major. It doesn’t matter that this guy will probably call him a faggot in front of his frat brothers if they run into each other again. It doesn’t even matter that he’s Robert Pine’s son and supposed to live up to the family legacy or whatever.

 

What matters is that, in that moment, he is more powerful than any man alive.


Three... And More

By now he’s used to the taste, the smell, the raw feeling in his throat. And when he hears “those lips were made for sucking cock,” he just smiles – a slow, knowing grin that quirks up a little higher on the left side of his mouth and infallibly leaves the speaker a little breathless and a lot aroused.

 

Chris can pretty much have his pick now. He tends to like the arrogant type, the big manly men who will defend their heterosexuality even as Chris is sucking away, turning their bones to jelly.   But he doesn’t let it get boring. Sometimes he picks the lonely, artsy kid in the back of the bar who’s struggling to get up the courage to even approach Chris. He likes those guys, too; they’re sweet and grateful, even if they don’t know how to reciprocate.

 

He’s long gotten over the need for reciprocation – it sort of ruins the whole effect, in fact. No, Chris much prefers just standing up when it’s over (fully clothed, as always), dropping a cool one-liner, and walking out the door

 

And if he ends up jerking off roughly in the shower afterward before crawling into bed to curl up with his knees against his chest, well, at least no one else has to see him like that.

 


Another One

“Been wanting to do this forever,” Chris says, kneeling in front of the big man and slowly licking his lips.

 

“You sure about this?”

 

“Absolutely.”

 

“Because I’m not really— Y’know—“

 

Chris chuckles. “You don’t even have to be gay – even bisexual – to appreciate a good blowjob. And I am very, very good.” He unbuckles the man’s belt, undoes the front of his jeans and takes his time doing so, never breaking eye contact. If there’s one thing he’s learned, it’s that a fantastic blowjob begins long before his lips get involved.

 

But once his lips do get involved, this man doesn’t stand a chance.   He’s got one big, strong hand at the back of Chris’ head, trying hard not to force him but failing spectacularly. And Chris lets him fuck his mouth, enjoys watching and feeling the smooth push of his hips until his rhythm falters and jerks and his release hits the back of Chris’ throat.

 

The big man slumps down the wall to the floor, his accent becoming much more pronounced. “Fuck, Chris, I don’t know what to say.” He gestures weakly at the bulge in Chris’ own jeans. “You want me to…?”

 

“Don’t worry about it, Karl. And I mean it – this doesn’t change anything. Like I said, I’ve been wanting to do that for a long time.”


This One

“Chris, no. Ohhh, fuck— Not like this. Stop, please.”

 

Chris doesn’t listen. He’s heard endless combinations of “please” and “stop” and “no,” which coming as they do in this particular context (fully aroused male, pants down, Chris’ mouth around his cock) mean the exact opposite of what they say.

 

So he’s a bit surprised when the gentle hands in his hair firmly pull his head back, away from Zach’s cock. Not surprised – stunned. Not that he’s exactly running through a catalogue of past fucks in his head, but he can’t remember any guy actually pulling him off once Chris has his lips around him.

 

Even more surprising than that, he wants it this time. Really wants it – not for the power it gives him, but to see what Zach tastes like, for the way Zach moans deep in his chest like he can’t control the sounds he’s making.

 

Chris’ voice, when it comes, sounds strangely petulant. “But I— Don’t you want me to?”

 

Zach’s hand trembles against Chris’ cheek, but his eyes are clear and steady. “God, yes. And you can, later, I promise. But right now, I want… more.”

 

“More than what?” Chris asks, wanting to keel over and die at the small crack in his voice.

 

But Zach just smiles, pulling Chris to his feet and tenderly rubbing his thumb over the younger man’s slightly chapped lower lip. “More than your lips. More than your mouth. I want everything.”

 

And Chris maybe should have rolled his eyes at that and cracked a joke and gotten down on his knees and back to business. But his eyes can’t leave Zach’s and his voice doesn’t seem to want to work, and the older man takes advantage of this stillness to lean in and kiss Chris gently, almost teasingly, and so softly that when he pulls back, Chris’ lips are left tingling with need.

 

Zach purrs quietly against his mouth. “Damn, Chris, those lips were made for kissing.”

[identity profile] blcwriter.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
You do know how to break my heart in all the best ways.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, thanks!
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[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] jesse-kips.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
<333333 Amazing. Such a lovely sweet ending, loved it :D

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked the ending!

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

(Anonymous) 2009-08-19 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! The last line *got* me. This is great!
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[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
It's funny -- IRL I'm just about the least sappy person ever, but it all comes out in my writing. Thanks for commenting!

[identity profile] lafemmechatte.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*dances happily*

hello surprise karl appearance!

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
Quite frankly, I was a little surprised about Karl showing up as well. But he wanted in on the action, so what was I to do? ;o)

[identity profile] filthgoblin.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Damn. The Karl one? That was so fucking hot. And the last one was just beautiful. All were great. I enjoyed the lot. Very nicely done!

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you muchly!

[identity profile] babykid528.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Chris! <33333 I adored the ending! And ZOMG The Karl/Chris sneak attack!! XD I'm starting to LOVE that pairing! lol!

Excellent fic!! :-D

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I don't read a lot of Chris/Karl because I'm apparently a fervent slash-monogamist, but Karl wanted to play. And who wouldn't, right?

[identity profile] high-flyer87.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Woah! Karl/Chris sneak-attack FTW!!! XD
That was hot. Slutty Chris never ceases to entertain.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmm... slutty Chris... I'm sorry, what?

Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Cool, thanks.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
No, thank YOU!

[identity profile] mizubyte.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
guh. dead on the floor over here. so hot.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
The porn ambulance is on its way!

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[identity profile] silvaa.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
gah beautiful my brain is awash with lust and aww in equal measure :D

x

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Then my job here is done!

[identity profile] fizzerbass.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
Finally, someone sees Chris for his true worth. :) This was lovely, thanks for sharing.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
You're most welcome!

[identity profile] vicki_rae.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
Zach purrs quietly against his mouth. “Damn, Chris, those lips were made for kissing.”

Guh. Wobble. Poor Chris but now it's all better because Zach sees past the gorgeous mouth to the real Chris.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
::nods enthusiastically:: Zach makes it all better. Thanks for reading!
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[identity profile] subarashiine.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
*writhes on the floor*

PERFECT!

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] ewinfic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Ack.

What matters is that, in that moment, he is more powerful than any man alive.

And then:

He’s long gotten over the need for reciprocation – it sort of ruins the whole effect, in fact. No, Chris much prefers just standing up when it’s over (fully clothed, as always), dropping a cool one-liner, and walking out the door.

And if he ends up jerking off roughly in the shower afterward before crawling into bed to curl up with his knees against his chest, well, at least no one else has to see him like that.


And ... damn. Just, damn. Chris's sex life bears some uncomfortable parallels to... damn.

And then:

“Damn, Chris, those lips were made for kissing.”

I fell completely in love.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
Aw. I'm glad you liked it! I'm a bit in love with fictional!Zach myself.

[identity profile] rockinhamburger.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
I want this to be true. Is that bad?

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely not ;o)

[identity profile] tasty-boots.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
This has already been said in just about every way possible, but

JNSZLIGUBHSFIBNDHJG. *flailmeltdierepeat*

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Last line = JUBGSIRG<3SKFZJGLOVELOVELOVEFSXDKGBJR<3KSZJUGBVLFB.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
Hmmm... no, I don't believe it's been said in EXACTLY that way before. I'm glad you liked it!

[identity profile] sarahphym.livejournal.com 2009-08-22 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
this is pretty much epic because chris pine's cocksucking mouth is like my number one chris-pine-why-so-fine? moment inducer.

um, yeah.

and the last line is lovely. :) ♥

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-23 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
my number one chris-pine-why-so-fine? moment inducer

Since I seriously dislike communicating in acronyms, I will just say, with all sincerity, that this made me giggle. Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] ibkod.livejournal.com 2009-08-24 06:53 am (UTC)(link)
ASDFGH. You have slayed me. Adorable.

And the added Karl bonus gave me great glee.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-08-24 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] pikasafire.livejournal.com 2009-08-31 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
*wibble* Oh, this was gorgeous. HOW DID I NOT KNOW YOU EXISTED! *adds you to LJ stalk!list*

I really, especially loved the one with Karl. Oh, Chris.

And Zach. That last line, guh, just AMAZING.

*gievs you cookies* You have been upgraded to my Pinto GOD. *wanders off to go read AAAAAAAAAAAALL your fic*

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for the cookies! And for noticing I exist! ;o)

[identity profile] colazitron.livejournal.com 2009-09-23 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
*meep* *keels over*

Sorry, died of pretty.

I love your fluff. I really, really do.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-09-24 07:05 am (UTC)(link)
The fluff, it loves you back. Thanks!

[identity profile] ms-mercurial.livejournal.com 2009-12-07 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
The last line - oh.
Just, well, perfect.

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2009-12-07 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] wanderlight.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, that last line KILLED me. <3

[identity profile] the-deep-magic.livejournal.com 2010-10-15 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Hopefully in a good way. ;o) Thanks!

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