Read this last night, timing was PERFECT in the story *grin* and I really liked how the first person perspective turned out, usually it screams "Hidden Mary Sue" at me, but this time just... fit. Really well... unf.
I SO hope you plan to write Chris' perspective of his obsession with Zach's lips.
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Date: 2010-09-01 01:05 pm (UTC)I SO hope you plan to write Chris' perspective of his obsession with Zach's lips.