I read this the other day on my phone... LOOKED for it and there it was, you had updated like an absolute doll, and I squealed and read it quickly. I'm so glad I have a chance to comment now.
I love.
LOVE.
The fact that Zach had a freakout. This is so realistic, painfully so. The way he experiences it, the way he reacts afterward, it's all so real. And the way Chris deals with everything is still so amazing.
The conversation about love in particular tugged at me...
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Date: 2010-09-26 12:36 am (UTC)I read this the other day on my phone... LOOKED for it and there it was, you had updated like an absolute doll, and I squealed and read it quickly. I'm so glad I have a chance to comment now.
I love.
LOVE.
The fact that Zach had a freakout. This is so realistic, painfully so. The way he experiences it, the way he reacts afterward, it's all so real. And the way Chris deals with everything is still so amazing.
The conversation about love in particular tugged at me...
I just love the pacing and the emotion.