Ok, I'll start with the cuddling. Because the image alone is so damn sweet. Makes me kind of think they're in love(or heading there at some point and don't know it. Or just watching them cuddle.)
All. The. Touching. I know it's part of the therapy here, but I adore the way you describe it. And Zach finally taking initative and touching Chris first. Accompanying that with the kissing just seems to make it twice as good. I'd totally love to see you incorporating more touch segments in future fic, that's all up to you though, I loved it in this though!
The sex scene came across very, very believeable. Getting hot and heavy and then knocking he wind out of Chris: easily relatable. However, this line : “You are so fucking sexy.” I had to squirm a bit to get comfortable. Chris-imagining the voice he'd be using.....UGH.
Talk about greatest cliffhanger ever. Awesome, delicious, seriously hot sex (don't know why, but seeing Chris splayed out, no matter how many times we've read him like that, this just came across sooo much sexier.), now I don't know what the FUCK may happen now. Ugh. *goes back to re-read til the end*
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Date: 2010-10-02 06:27 am (UTC)Ok, I'll start with the cuddling. Because the image alone is so damn sweet. Makes me kind of think they're in love(or heading there at some point and don't know it. Or just watching them cuddle.)
All. The. Touching. I know it's part of the therapy here, but I adore the way you describe it. And Zach finally taking initative and touching Chris first. Accompanying that with the kissing just seems to make it twice as good. I'd totally love to see you incorporating more touch segments in future fic, that's all up to you though, I loved it in this though!
The sex scene came across very, very believeable. Getting hot and heavy and then knocking he wind out of Chris: easily relatable. However, this line : “You are so fucking sexy.” I had to squirm a bit to get comfortable. Chris-imagining the voice he'd be using.....UGH.
Talk about greatest cliffhanger ever. Awesome, delicious, seriously hot sex (don't know why, but seeing Chris splayed out, no matter how many times we've read him like that, this just came across sooo much sexier.), now I don't know what the FUCK may happen now. Ugh. *goes back to re-read til the end*