Date: 2009-09-13 04:25 am (UTC)
I am in actual love with this fic. Like, I feel like this fic is taking me out on dates. And I would totally marry it, the way it's behaved so far. Because O. M. G.

I want to quote everything, just so you know. I'll have to take the uber quotes among the really-really-good ones.

He made it all the way to the car before indulging in the I Kissed Zach Victory Dance.

I cackled like an idiot.

And then Mitchell. Okay, the image of them snogging with that GODAWFUL SONG in the background nearly ruined it for me. (Who am I kidding? They could totally pull that off.)

Suddenly, Chris understood for the first time just how much Zach was holding back[...] Zach sighed and closed his eyes, bringing his hands up to rest on Chris’ shoulders. “No, no. I know. But this needs to be on your terms, Chris. I want you so badly, and I can wait, but… you should know that I have limits.” [...] “Look, I’ve felt this for a long time. Longer than I’d like to admit. I’ve only got one chance to win you over, and I’m terrified I’m going to scare you off the second it really sinks in that I’ve got a dick.”

My heart actually fluttered.

I don't know where you got your Zach, but I want one. Badly. I'm tempted to see if I can grow one.

And then they fall asleep together...

I can't wait. I can not wait. But if they go on twelve more dates before finally consummating this, I won't mind if you're the one writing them, because this was sheer chocolate from beginning to end.

It actually made me want to go on a date. (I hate dating.)

ILU.
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